Professor feedback:<\/p>\n
As I go through the file I see that it is really not revised at all; some of the changes I made were worked in and the others left alone. Because I was conscious of the seriousness of revision, I asked you to revise your manuscript at least five times. We cannot take any short cuts with that necessary step.<\/p>\n
I went up to page 20 in the new version you sent me. I see that the same old repetitions and sentence errors continue. The only way to go forward is for me to rewrite your dissertation. That will not be possible; I am here to tell you how to correct and how to write, not write the dissertation for you and to give you a refined submission copy.<\/p>\n
Please please please write carefully<\/p>\n
“Sateesh Rangoli Diss2_FinalCopy” is the final feedback given by professor as per previous submission<\/p>\n
“Student Writing Sample” file and “Student Sample1” are the sample files given by professor how dissertation paper should be<\/p>\n
“Sateesh Rangoli Diss_1st feedback” is the first feedback given by professor. Content submitted which was intial was very bad.<\/p>\n
We also need to update “Sateesh Rangoli Diss2_FinalCopy” paper with feedback from file “Sateesh Rangoli Diss_1st feedback” as content is very
\nbad as per professor notes<\/p>\n
Professor’s response:<\/p>\n
As I look through the file, I notice that it hasn’t been altered at all; some of the modifications I made have been incorporated, while others have been left alone. I asked you to modify your manuscript at least five times since I was aware of the importance of revision. With that required step, we cannot take any shortcuts.<\/p>\n
In the revised version you supplied me, I got up to page 20. I note that the same old repetitions and grammatical faults are still present. Only by having me rewrite your dissertation can we move forward. That will not be possible; I am here to teach you how to modify and write your dissertation, not to write it for you.<\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"
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