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Professor feedback:

As I go through the file I see that it is really not revised at all; some of the changes I made were worked in and the others left alone. Because I was conscious of the seriousness of revision, I asked you to revise your manuscript at least five times. We cannot take any short cuts with that necessary step.

I went up to page 20 in the new version you sent me. I see that the same old repetitions and sentence errors continue. The only way to go forward is for me to rewrite your dissertation. That will not be possible; I am here to tell you how to correct and how to write, not write the dissertation for you and to give you a refined submission copy.

Please please please write carefully

“Sateesh Rangoli Diss2_FinalCopy” is the final feedback given by professor as per previous submission

“Student Writing Sample” file and “Student Sample1” are the sample files given by professor how dissertation paper should be

“Sateesh Rangoli Diss_1st feedback” is the first feedback given by professor. Content submitted which was intial was very bad.

We also need to update “Sateesh Rangoli Diss2_FinalCopy” paper with feedback from file “Sateesh Rangoli Diss_1st feedback” as content is very
bad as per professor notes

Professor’s response:

As I look through the file, I notice that it hasn’t been altered at all; some of the modifications I made have been incorporated, while others have been left alone. I asked you to modify your manuscript at least five times since I was aware of the importance of revision. With that required step, we cannot take any shortcuts.

In the revised version you supplied me, I got up to page 20. I note that the same old repetitions and grammatical faults are still present. Only by having me rewrite your dissertation can we move forward. That will not be possible; I am here to teach you how to modify and write your dissertation, not to write it for you.